I have been struggling with how to show the change in the character, how he does what he does and why. The "why" is so important and I had the how but not the why. And I just figured out how to do that. This will make the opening action of the story, (I wrote book, and erased it, carts and horses please) make sense. I have had all but the genesis of what begins Trapper's story. This is wonderful!!!